Corvin 2.0: (Just Like) Starting Over

Hey Dear Readers, welcome to my first post in 2013!
Last summer there was some talk on my behalf of redrawing the pages of my famously pending "graphic novel", Corvin. Now it's aaall happening!
Let's hope that it results in a more professional look than what I was capable of doing three or four years ago.

Now, behold Chapter 1, page 1 and 2:

 

Panel 3

Pip: Where on earth are we?
Colin: How should I know? I thought we were only testing the passage gate and arriving at the courtyard of the palace! Pip: Well, this is positively not Milan!

Panel1
Pip: What the heck is this?
 
Panel 2
Pip: Look, here's our pack!
Colin: Yep, and a letter too!

Panel 3
Pip: Whaaat...???

Panel 4
Colin: So that's why we had to test it at once!
letter: Ragazzi!
We are short on time so you had to travel right away. Do as I told and find Lord Corvin.
Best of luck,
Il Principe

Panel 5
Pip: So much about testing... Such a shifty crook! What shall we do now?
Colin: Let's go find this Corvin guy! We are supposed to be on his estates. Someone will surely give us directions!

Also, the following page is going to a genuinely new one. It will take a couple of weeks to appear here, as I haven't really started working on it yet.